The shadowy figure said "I told you ask my sis out your dead!" I reconized the voice it was... her brother. He charged at me I avoided him. I started giving him a flurry of blows he had a nose bleed. He said "Okay I guess your good enough to go out with my sister." I was finally able to go out with Hayley. Her brother left.
While I was walking her home I stopped for a minute she asked "Are you okay?"I replied " I'm fine but I don't know why I had to fight your brother." She explained that her brother was over protective. Hayley explained that everything would be alright. When we got to her house before she walked up the driveway I kissed her.
She said she'll see me at school. When I got home it was 9:00 my sister was curious she asked where was I. I said I was on a date. She was surprised because I was younger and she didn't even have a date. I went upstairs and went to sleep I was beat.















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